How wonderful
Does it feel
To sing the
Song of victory?
“sweet, magical
Breathtaking.”
They always say.
Let me tell you
A secret.
Which they hide
The deepest.
“It’s not easy
To create a history.
One suffers
Hell of a pleasing
Misery.
Barefoot, one tries
To walk on
The pebbles
scattered By road.
To succeed,
Many a times,
For days together
One just stops
To cry and,
Just to bleed.
His hopes die.
Many friends bid
A goodbye.
But a few
Do stay
To help him
Continue
With His ride.
Defeating the foes.
Fighting his
Inner negative cores.
He reaches the
Home of his dreams.
Eyes glisten
with tears.
Hands shake
With fear.
Full of hope
He rings the bell.
Only to realise
He’s at a wrong door.”
See I told you the
Biggest secret.
Struggles don’t promise
Success in
Fraction of seconds.
It may take months,
Or even years,
To watch
It’s true existence.
A piece of advice
I bring to you.
When it gets harder
To keep going
And you feel
Like giving it all up,
Remember what they tell
Is also true.
Singing the success song
Is undoubtedly,
So sweet
That it magically,
Takes your breath away
For a moment or two.
This is very well written…really impressive!
The last lines are a perfect end…
That it magically takes your breath away for a moment or two….
Seriously beautiful..💘
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Thank you so so much! 🎈
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So true, we all like to sing a song of success.
Enjoyed reading this poem!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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This is beautifully written. You have greatly presented the “song of success” and what it takes to be successful. I mean the hard and soft moments which comes across often during the course of time. Very nicely penned. Liked it. 😊👍
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Thank you so much Ashish for saying so. I’m so glad you liked it. 😊🍁
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